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Do you see the water?
That used to be me
Flowing, oh so carefree
Leaving Mother Earth
Once in a while
(It was a heated disagreement)
But I come back
I always come back.

Do you see the skeleton?
That used to be me
Cold bones, white, bleached
In the sun
(It was only an accident)
So I stay
I always stay.

Do you see the lightning?
That used to be me
Oh, too late.
(It was a flash you know)
There's not enough time
There's always not enough time.

Do you see the blue marble?
That's where I am
Small, minute
You could block me out with your thumb.
Abundant yet lonely
I am always lonely.
So, do you see it?
Trying another way of invoking imagery
it works for me, but does it work for you?
i think this link might help: [link]
(c)Gotterdam16
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CutieSoul159 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Baby you're never alone :) You gots me :D
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yarryanotak Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;-; The last two lines are very solemn...
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